Preferred To Bear Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Preferred To Bear
I knew nothing
Yet starved for something
One thing was worrying
I was still carrying
I had good house
To share with members and friends
The mother was always there
To share grief and adore
I worried internally
But that did not bother really
I thought of real home
Where I expected to be welcome
Where shall I be resting?
After life completes testing
What shall be my destiny?
Where shall I seek his mercy?
I knew about one place
Even though no one raced
Voluntarily but out of fear
This pain and anguish I preferred to bear
In born anxiety about life after death- - Subhashchandra Adhav1 hour ago The poem reflects mysterious attraction towards Heavenly Abode that is final destination and destiny of everyone, you have expressed it well with reference to the mundane ambience- - - - - Nicely structured and well composed piece- - - - Really food for thought- - - - - Very elegant work- - - - Keep it coming- - - Thanks for sharing.
Ok. Samantha Pluszczynski2 hours ago I feel you have a lot of anger built up about certain parts of your life.One where you feel welcome and another where you don't know where to go. Let yourself go and delve into where your mind is at one certain time. There is a beginning, end and conclusion, but after if all where do you see yourself. Not just in the moment, but from where that fear brought you to understanding for your future. Comment +1
not bad Billy Loving2 hours ago could use some revision Comment +1
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I knew nothing Yet starved for something