Primitive Rules Still Followed Poem by Muzahidul Reza

Primitive Rules Still Followed

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Takers they are everything
Givers they are nothing
Primitive rules they are following
Might is right,
Peace and justice are problems to them
They are shattering,
With them how are you living?
In peaceless kind mind
With workless wise brain
Being swindled by those ugly cheat
Yet you are waiting for a good morning
Living with pains in heart.

Copyright © Muzahidul Reza | 09/22/2017

Friday, September 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: ancient,cheat,cheater,cheating,hypocrisy,rules
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 22 September 2017

Primitive rules they are following is might is right. Here many are takers and givers are very, very less. Ugly cheating gives pain and hurting and this provokes thought. Like diamonds and dust memories, hits our minds and falls apart. Through perception we can know this. To get dusted for another day in future is so sad. But we need life to dazzle like diamond. We need trust in life. Cheating is bad that makes life very dusty. Trust makes life dazzling like diamond. Amazing and brilliant thought is shared here...10

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Muzahidul Reza 22 September 2017

Takers they are everything Givers they are nothing Primitive rules they are following Might is right, Peace and justice are problems to them They are shattering,

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Muzahidul Reza 22 September 2017

With them how are you living? In peaceless kind mind With workless wise brain Being swindled by those ugly cheat Yet you are waiting for a good morning Living with pains in heart.

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Charaihatee; Mohangonj; Rajibpur.
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