Sunday, February 25, 2018

Prison Of Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

She wrote into my dreams
the first line of a nightmare

And I can no longer sleep
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Kurt Philip Behm
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Bernard F. Asuncion 26 February 2018

Kurt, such a brilliant write👍👍👍

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George Krokos 25 February 2018

Quite a powerful piece of writing, well done.

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Seamus O Brian 25 February 2018

Wow, this one has bite. Intriguing and sharp. Those first two stanzas reflect a mastery of expression that is just exceptional, and then the last 2 leave the reader bound in contemplation.

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