Train Of Thought Poem by Ivan Ng1

Train Of Thought

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Something is approaching.
Clink! Clank! Clunk!
I attempt to stand where the doors open.
A rush of warm air overcomes me as I look for a seat.
Every time the doors open again I am closer to home.
Looking down at the city gives me an illusion of power.
'This is Halsted. This is an Orange Line train to Midway.'

A rush of cold air overcomes me.

Tuesday, October 28, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: city,power
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.Wardha Jawdat 01 November 2008

marvellous....you have a very fresh charming way about putting imageries across...everyday topics treated lovngly.

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Joseph Poewhit 28 October 2008

Captures those train feelings

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I love the usage of sound.

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