Promise Poem by Nikunj Sharma

Promise



I may not be the phenomenon
I want to be.

But I shall try to be the change
That you want to see

I silently made this promise
to almighty.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lady Grace 06 August 2009

promises...speechless...this is nice..

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Danny H 28 July 2009

Short, but yet well spoken. Keep your promise, they can mean much to some people. breaking them could ruin them.

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Deborah Cromer 03 July 2009

Prayer like promise. A very simple poem with great big meaning. Length in a poem is not necessary always, it is how powerful that matters. Big things come in small packages! This is very dear from the heart. Alot of readers can understand the feeling in this poem, they will relate. Bravo! Deborah Cromer

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Christina Phan 26 June 2009

i luv ur cute, quite, poem amazing short one kept it up 7+

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 June 2009

Cute silent promise. Lovely.

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