Nikunj Sharma

Rookie (12-01-1972 / New Delhi)

! ! ~~ Merry Xmas ~~! ! - Poem by Nikunj Sharma

The wind carries soft whispers
that winter has preserves for me.
The morning sun opens its eyes,
Rays struggle to see through the fog.

The snow continues to prepare
for the sledge, that shall prick
the heart to deliver the bounty
for the eyes that wait here.

Small eyes begin to shine again;
It's time to hold your dreams
and harbor hopes. The divine courier
is never too busy.

Before opening the wrap, I Shall
ask my questions, if I'm permitted
time. I've Heard the queue is
getting longer by the day.

A lighted tree echoes with smiles
as expectation takes birth. The mind
searches through the stacked
wants and desires.

A beam opens thought into points
where no sunlight reaches.
A thousand splendid suns illuminate
spirit's dark alleys.

14th December 2009


Comments about ! ! ~~ Merry Xmas ~~! ! by Nikunj Sharma

  • Marilyn Lott (3/11/2013 10:10:00 PM)


    This is a beautiful and sensitive look into the heart of Christmas. Sweet and thoughtfully written.

    Warm Wishes,
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  • (1/15/2010 7:05:00 AM)


    Great imagery, a heart warming poem, hope you had a great Christmas, and it can be sled or sledge (same meaning)
    10
    Lynda xx
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  • (1/12/2010 10:41:00 PM)


    What a beautiful poem Nik! ! I gave it a 10! You are extremely talented. =) (Report) Reply

  • (12/31/2009 12:48:00 AM)


    A belated MERRY CHRISTMAS TO YOU
    AND FAMILY
    DEAR NIKSSSSSSS
    good write
    -10 anjali
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  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (12/29/2009 10:18:00 AM)


    this one is awesome! (Report) Reply

  • (12/28/2009 5:17:00 PM)


    Well merry christmas to you too
    good write
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  • Kimberly Lindsey (12/28/2009 5:34:00 AM)


    Very nice... up and expectant. I enjoyed! (Report) Reply

  • (12/25/2009 6:02:00 AM)


    Awell crafted poem, you set up the setting for a Xmas eve, all with well lit tree, and hopes soaring, pondering over Santa's plight.
    the last stanza
    a beam opens thoughts into points
    where no sunlight reaches.
    A thousand splendid suns illuminate
    spirit's dark alleys
    this stanza is open to multiple interpretations, hall mark of a great poet.

    Merry xmas and a happy new year.

    Mamta
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  • (12/24/2009 10:32:00 PM)


    great poem with a great ending thank the lord for xmas for giving work to far away poor putting silver balls in little bags for little faces with little smiles
    and a merry xmas to you too Nik++++10
    regards
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  • (12/24/2009 11:42:00 AM)


    i loved your poem alot it is wonderful (Report) Reply

  • Fay Slimm (12/24/2009 5:52:00 AM)


    'A thousasnd spendid sun' adorn your Xmas poem - - thank you Niks. and warmest of greetings from Fay. (Report) Reply

  • (12/24/2009 5:28:00 AM)


    Splendid expressive seasonal poem crafted with skill and delight.10
    Best wishes from


    Orlando
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  • The Jesus Of Suburbia Is A Lie (12/24/2009 5:01:00 AM)


    An excellent poem....i loved it...
    Sir, ur style of writing is a cent percent poetic one...as the old poets use to write...like oscar wilde...P.B. Shelley etc.
    Their
    The real meanin of their poems can be understand by readin more than once...
    Same case with u... :)
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  • (12/24/2009 4:32:00 AM)


    A splendid x-mas poem.....remarkable.........10 (Report) Reply

  • (12/24/2009 2:14:00 AM)


    Message from Walterrean Sally:

    Your beautiful prose
    And lovely rhyme
    Cheer me at
    This special time.
    And I am wishing
    You the best
    For peace and love,
    And happiness.

    Merry Christmas!
    And Happy Holidays!
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  • (12/24/2009 12:24:00 AM)


    IT WAS NICE READING YOUR POEM ON THIS CHRISTMAS EVE! 10!
    WISHING YOU A MERRY CHRISTMAS TOO!
    -Raj
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  • (12/23/2009 12:43:00 PM)


    Lovely, it reminded me of an innocent time when cristmas wasn't a comercialised farce, and captures the essence of what i think a lot of people will centimentally remember christmas this way (Report) Reply

  • (12/23/2009 7:08:00 AM)


    could see the little child in you nikunj in the poem and in your comments on your poem..the poem was sweet althrough..from the divine courier to extending line of presents..the last lines open up a new world like christmas does a new year....beautiful (Report) Reply

  • (12/23/2009 6:37:00 AM)


    Beautiful write. Your last stanza says it all.
    Merry Chistmas, dear Nikunj. And thank you
    for your warm friendship in 2009.

    Friends at poemhunter,

    Sandra
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  • (12/23/2009 6:25:00 AM)


    ♫ ♪ MERRY CHRISTMAS EVERYONE ♫ ♪

    As invited, so I am here… It is a nice poem, for me, yes it is… though we are people of different minds and opinions… let’s just continue doing what we love to do. Playing with the words especially if it is for good is such a wonderful event. I am just new in this site but I start loving it.

    I’ll be reading and writing you guys around.
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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 14, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, February 1, 2010


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