Provide the space
Saturday,11th August 2018
Love can never be the story
as it is a gift from an almighty
the person must know about the consequences
if falls in love at once
it might be in a different form
but it is conveyed or informed
for many, it shall be a simple feeling
but from inside it may be killing
the love is differently understood
many may feel it as good
but it is conveyed differently
and picked too instantly
no, love is no lust
but built on trust
that is the prime condition
and builds the permanent relation
let love mushroom
and we must provide the room
space for an adjustment
and for making it as the memorable moment
Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta
Beautifully written Sir Srikala, Chennai, Aug 12,2018 18
no, love is no but built on trust Indeed true, sir. Sneha Thiyagarajan, Bangalore, Aug 12,2018
let love mushroom and we must provide the room space for an adjustment and for making it as the memorable moment Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta
Nice composition on the nature of love that comes from your vast experience of life and worldly matters. GSP Rao, Hyderabad, Aug 12,2018
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice. Love redefined. Mainak Chatterjee, Chennai, Aug 12,2018