Pt.3 Unexpected Sequal Poem by Logan Rheinst

Pt.3 Unexpected Sequal

Rating: 4.5


Are you deaf?
Do you hear my plea?
Are you blind?
Is it my heart you can't see?

I thought I made it clear.
I thought i said it all.
Perhaps there's something left to say.
That led up to my fall.

Lost in my thoughts,
buried under lust.
I searched far and wide,
but it failed to come up.

Maybe you thought,
I was kiding before.
But let it be known,
I've never meant it more.

At that moment I tried,
to keep it inside.
I failed to confide.
I choked up and died.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
***** ********* 13 February 2006

Sorry did you say something Logan? lol I like the tone of this little ditty of yours, I give you 9 cus I think it could end on not dying. I know it's your poem. Grinning Tai

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