Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 148,148 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Purely We Feel This Morning Air - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Moring has arrived and new light is seen,
Crows are doing caw, caw to awaken,
Time is refreshing moment of appearance,
Sun is smiling in far eastern horizon.

Purely we feel now gentle wind is blowing,
Faith for God is growing more with light,
We are realizing the path of eternity,
Having journey in this is wisely noticed.

Touch of cool breeze and gentle wind
Both are motivating mind for devotion,
Strife is not coming at all in mind,
Beauty is praying before God forever.

Devotional attitudes are seen in leaves,
Trees are twisting their turn towards light,
Interesting perception is brought up ahead,
Fresh air is blowing for favour of purity.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,12 August,2017. All rights reserved.

Topic(s) of this poem: morning, nature, spiritual, beauty


Comments about Purely We Feel This Morning Air by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Susan Williams (8/13/2017 3:52:00 PM)


    Devotional attitudes are seen in leaves,
    Trees are twisting their turn towards light, - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Very good use of imagery to make your point strong as well as beautiful. Our souls do turn to the light until we have twisted our instincts with our bad choices. Well chosen topic to write upon.
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  • Captain Cur (8/13/2017 11:26:00 AM)


    The beauty of sunrise and the crisp clean feel of morning air. Great use of imagery to recreate this feeling of oneness with the universal spirit of god. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 12, 2017



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