Pushy Much Poem by susette varga

Pushy Much

Rating: 5.0


Conflict of interests
Pushing too hard
Trying too much
making it more than it is
Does this coupling exist?
All to one sided
No compromise
Maybe the devil
In a guise?

Thursday, January 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: disappointment
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 02 February 2018

Your little poem carrying tone of disappointment is quite insightful............10

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Bri Edwards 14 January 2018

i read your bio, so i know you want readers to 'go easy on you' for a while. good advice for us! i don't believe in the 'devil', but surely some feelings can make one believe at least temporarily that one exists. i don't believe in 'God' either. (i used to believe in both in my youth) but, hey, anything is possible i guess. like YOU FEELING BETTER! ! ! bri :) now, ..........YOU smile too! ! ! ! do it! ! !

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