In the blink of an eye you were gone
Too many obstacles to overcome
So many issues from women in your past
Sadly we were destined never to last
Understanding, compassion totally lost
Unwilling to be strong
Leaving the baggage from the past behind
Was the only way we could have survived
we do not live in an ideal world and you have well captured the realities of life...
Well written keep it up... You can also read my Nerve of poetry
The temperamental and whimsical nature of love are aptly captured in the poem. A well drafted piece of poetry nicely penned with insight. Thanks for sharing Susette.
Leaving the baggage from the past behind Was the only way we could have survived... beautyful! thanks my friend
Unwilling to be strong Leaving the baggage from the past behind Was the only way we could have survived.....thinking about the past and reflecting to save the love and the relationship.. thank u dear poetess.. dev
thoughtful saying - Sadly we were destined never to last great 10++
Lovely lines filled with a laudable lesson! Leaving the baggage is not always easy but it is necessary for survival. Well done!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Thank you Chinedu... so lovely of you to say xxx