Pyramids Poem by R.Benjamin Abate

Pyramids

Rating: 5.0


We were lying together
Drinking French Kiwi Juice
While laying on our backs
In a field playing silent
Music as we ran
our hands across one
Another's skin & I said,

'Let's go to Egypt
& Climb the pyramids,
Then scream at the top
Like wolves howling at the moon.'

To which you replied,
'Let's just build our own
Pyramid & climb
To the top - we'll scream
A little louder.'

I smiled - then I ran
My hand up your back
& Through your hair.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny Draper 24 June 2013

A very romantic piece, of metaphor and imagination.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 22 June 2013

Aha wow a unique idea poem soo enjoyable to read on the century old pyramids n what u cud build daydreamin. I hope u review mine latest too.

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