what lies
beyond that fence?
all over,
mist and obscurity
prevail
the sky, clouds,
rain and uncertainty
a wave,
an untold story
shaking my room
is it an earthquake?
i can't see the door
on the table,
a book on adventure
i wear
the dress of a diver
Enticing and enigmatic. Poem with a different
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The scenery you've drawn with this poem inspired me to write a similar poem on uncertainty of life. I hope you like it as much as I enjoyed reading your poem. The brevity makes me focus more on feelings than words. Write more showing this style as it allows audience participation.
Thank you very much, dear poet Doris, for your valuable and inspiring comments.