Quest Poem by Chandan Dey

Quest

Rating: 5.0


what lies
beyond that fence?

all over,
mist and obscurity
prevail

the sky, clouds,
rain and uncertainty

a wave,
an untold story
shaking my room

is it an earthquake?

i can't see the door

on the table,
a book on adventure

i wear
the dress of a diver

Quest
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life is an endless mystery. It's like an ocean. With the passage of time, we continue to unravel it. There are many incidents, old or recent, that compel us to explore those oceanic mysteries.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Doris Cornago 23 November 2022

The scenery you've drawn with this poem inspired me to write a similar poem on uncertainty of life. I hope you like it as much as I enjoyed reading your poem. The brevity makes me focus more on feelings than words. Write more showing this style as it allows audience participation.

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Chandan Dey 01 December 2022

Thank you very much, dear poet Doris, for your valuable and inspiring comments.

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UNNIKRISHNAN Sivasankara Menon 19 September 2022

Enticing and enigmatic. Poem with a different

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Chandan Dey 20 September 2022

Dear poet, many thanks for your inspiring words.

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Chandan Dey 20 September 2022

Many thanks for your valuable comment/

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