Silent Viewers Poem by Chandan Dey

Silent Viewers

Rating: 5.0


The night was on the horizon.

My friend and I were walking silent
on a complex field
covered with a strange white fog;

on one side,
we heard city's clatter
saw the glare of light;

on the other,
we saw the darkest houses of the specters
and felt their soundless movement.

There a cyclic clock giving
Time on timeless…

Silent Viewers
Sunday, April 22, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: protest,social injustice,time,timeless
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lungelo S Mbuyazi 02 July 2018

Well, silent viewers, come out talking now for these verse leaves a reader with a lot to ponder about...like it

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Chandan Dey 04 July 2018

Thanks for your time and precise comment. Chandan

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Chinedu Dike 06 June 2018

A pleasant display of fine poetic skills in fine and lofty verse, well conceived and elegantly crafted with insight. An art of a sober mind. Thanks for sharing.

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Chandan Dey 07 June 2018

Thanks Chinedu for your deep insightful comment. Chandan

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 May 2018

There are two notes I find that GOD created everything in paired. Time denotes also two conditions of every circumstances great writing 10+++

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Chandan Dey 07 June 2018

Thanks Mahtab for your beautiful comment. Chandan

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Britte Ninad 24 May 2018

wow fine arts of word- There a cyclic clock giving Time on timeless... great 10+++++

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Chandan Dey 07 June 2018

Thanks for your wonderful comment. Chandan

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 May 2018

It's a fabulous poem! Wonderful photography! Loved reading this little piece of sparkling poetry! I vote it with a 10

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Chandan Dey 15 May 2018

Thanks for your inspiring comment. Chandan

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