My Friend And I Poem by Chandan Dey

My Friend And I

Rating: 5.0


(I)

You're like sweet soft breeze of evening summer
always making a kiss on me, but in no way can i
make the same on you.

(II)

You're like a co-passenger whom i can't see
but who sits beside and takes me to the next stoppage
timely and safely.

(III)

The uncanny fragrance edifies me:
it's always fair-one can touch
the petals, not their colors.

Tuesday, April 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rob Lamberton 15 February 2024

The gifts we are given …edifying!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 July 2018

Friendship occurs automatically in a journey. In the bus or train or on the way we often have new friends who give us pleasure and help. You have so touchingly inscribed this poem on love and friendship. Excellent.10

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Chandan Dey 01 August 2018

Even a friend whom we can't touch, speak sitting in front can inspire us, friendship is such a loving concept! Thank you very much for your inspiring comment, dear poet Kumarmani. Chandan

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Ramesh T A 28 April 2018

Summer breeze, companion in train and fragrance are nice friends to accompany one in need!

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Chandan Dey 29 April 2018

Dear poet thank you very much for making this nice comment. All these friends represent a loving invisible intangible Friend. Because of him never become we alone!

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