R-A-I-N Poem by .Pd. is here

R-A-I-N

Rating: 4.5


Sun hides. Dark sky.
Gloomy.Varied hues.
Thunder loud.

Lightning. Pure silver.
God's cliking a picture.
Turbulent sky.Black.Blue.

Little rain drops.Heaven's cry.
God's tears of joy.
Prayer's answered.

Trees sway.Soil Perfumed.
Wind blows.Pitter patter.
Triumphant rain.

Happy - Sad.Dual sensation.
Nostalgia.Beauty. Refreshing.
Marvelous Spectacle. Magical.....

'R-A-I-N'


(! 5 April,2006)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ray Forever 15 April 2006

Preeti...Such a sweet poem capturing the beauty of rain...Loved the Soil Perfumed...

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Sandra Fowler 21 April 2006

Rain is a poem in itself and you have captured its music very well. Regards, Sandra

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Tarun Sharma 14 September 2008

Sweet! and Nice rgds

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Catastrophe King 19 August 2006

Simply Pure. Genuine Thoughts. Amazing Creation. Talented Poet.......... You are. Vote 10. You are so simple... yet so great!

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Rain is definately magical, it creates magic in my place,10 for this one Preets.

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NICE QUICK MOVING POEM, WITH ATASTE OF THE ABSTRACTS...LOVE THAT...WELL CRAFTED..SOLID 10! FRANK

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Jay P. Narain 27 April 2006

Preeti, It is one of the nicest poem on rain I have ever seen. Great writing. Good writing in future, Jay

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