Radioactive Donuts Comments

Great subject, sugar, our choices but the last line could be improved: e.g.In the midst of a sugar buzz we were suddenly sobered by such careless choices.....

I'm reminded of asbestos mining illnesses suffered years after the fact (I believe) by miners without respirators.: (

'While heat stress and climate change have contributed to this epidemic, researchers have identified tiny silica particles released from sugarcane ash that can be inhaled or ingested through contaminated drinking water that cause chronic kidney damage.'

Denis, I may return to this poem after my donut-break. : ) bri Drink milk with it.

FOUR: The poem invites readers to reflect on their own connections to heritage and the ever-changing world around them A profound poem

THREE; Through vivid images and metaphors, he explores the tension between tradition and modernity. highlighting the power of language and the echoes of history.

TWO: It explores the interaction between past and present, the struggle to preserve cultural heritage, and the impact of transience on our lives.

By giving numbers, the response will be read in the correct way.ONE: it revolves around the enduring nature of language, tradition and identity. .