Wednesday, January 13, 2010

Raging Sea, Raging Heart Comments

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the raging seas causing the waters to rise
the raging seas engulfing you and i.
it has no mercy, it has no heart
it cares not if it tears you apart.
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louis rams
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M Asim Nehal 20 March 2016

Superb poem, this raging sea is the metaphor for life and wonderfully written, thanks for sharing..10+++

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This poem is one of the best you crafted.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 13 January 2010

well written from a broken heart word flow with ease and emotion

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Pink Butterfly ... 13 January 2010

Well crafted poem! ! ! I flows gorgeously! ! ! ! God bless! ! ! -PinkButterfly-

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