Too many things
Hurt so much
That are not
Even pain
They Burden the heart
Eat at the mind
Join your tears
Like rain
Though we know rain
Is a glorious thing
And we need
So much more
If only
This rain
In time
Will release
The burden
To open
This locked door
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February 2020
Lyn Paul
PRAGMATISM IN ACTUAL LIFE ALWAYS PAYS HOPE OU WILL ALSO READ SOME OF MINE MOMS SMILES TO BEGIN WITH MA'AMY
Rain can be a blessing or disasterous But it fall for reason, disguise or illusion That we cant see by naked eyes but deeper than meaning In every hardship there will be doors as God says Either we see or we cant figure It still does, standing... Sorry Lyn just noticed your bday was last 17th ago Hope never too late to say Happy Belated Birthday May everything good show up itself, so u can see positive in everything i have in life Stay kind n preserve beautiful soul inside
Too many things bring burden in life is true. These things create pain in heart and gather tears in eyes like rain. A beautiful poem based on philosophy is amazingly shared.10
I appreciate the enlightening comment of poet @Valsa George. She has explained it so well in so few words!
Life becomes easy and comfortable when pains are allowed to be converted into rain and flow out as tears, making a heavy heart light. You have so poignantly described this scenario, well done! I've been visiting your beautiful country for the last two months. Shall be here for another three weeks and a half. Which city do you live in?
Pain is part of everyone's life! We cannot totally get rid of it. But sometimes pain stays in the heart as a heavy log. If it is allowed to flow out in the form of tears, we will get instant relief. When it lies frozen inside burdening our heart, it makes life all the more miserable. A highly poignant write, Lyn!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Gentle helplessness. Beautiful