Rain Gods Poem by Barry Middleton

Rain Gods

Rating: 5.0


I think that it will storm tonight
a change of season comes
I hear a rumble to the north
where rain gods beat their drums

a drought has parched a grieving earth
and fire has scorched the land
as smoke and ash ignored my prayer
awaiting this command

the moods of weather come and go
like luck and life and death
just when we think the end has come
the storm will gather breath

the rain has come too late for me
but that is quite alright
at least tomorrow gets relief
the rain will fall tonight

Rain Gods
Monday, June 5, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death,luck,rain,drought
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 07 June 2017

We also had rain last night after a spell of terrible heat. This poem speaks to my heart for we have harsh summers and we are often waiting for rain. As always, your poem says a lot. It's not just about rain, it's about life n fate. A profound work. A huge 10.

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Barry Middleton 07 June 2017

Thanks Nosheen. Yes, rain is a great metaphor for grace and luck.

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Lamar Cole 05 June 2017

Very nice nature poem with a good ending for tomorrow.

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Barry Middleton 05 June 2017

Thanks. I hear thunder as I am typing this though I wrote the poem a month ago. It looks like we are finally getting relief from the Florida drought. Rain and grace have a lot in common. We need both.

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