Sanjukta Nag

Gold Star - 21,168 Points (05-07-1992 / India)

Rain Soaked Sun Porch - Poem by Sanjukta Nag

Clouds are crawling like ghosts
Over the grassland,
Leaving moist message of mourning
Upon the tip of green.
The sky is not unlighted yet,
Shimmering with a pale whiteness
Like the sclera of your eyes.
Then a sudden gust of rain drenches
Our nostalgia for the sun,
That you’ve hoisted as yellow flags
At our open porch of afternoon-love.

Topic(s) of this poem: lovers, nature, rainy season

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Rain Soaked Sun Porch by Sanjukta Nag

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/11/2015 3:32:00 AM)


    Clouds are crawling like ghosts...Over the grassland, in this amazing imagery and this is definitely very interesting sharing.....10 (Report) Reply

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  • Shakil Ahmed (11/9/2015 10:01:00 AM)


    beautiful comparisons, nice images, well penned, thanks for sharing, (Report) Reply

  • (11/9/2015 1:54:00 AM)


    what a beautiful sunrise
    thanks
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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/9/2015 1:19:00 AM)


    Great imagery.........and awesome lines...Loved it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 9, 2015



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