((Rain)) Tanka Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

((Rain)) Tanka

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The earth is arid,
the high sun rapes the green land.
its fury burns the soil to break.
The habitat now is dead,
only the rainfall can save!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 13 November 2008

An excellent Tanka. May you hear rain on your roof very soon. Kind regards, Sandra

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Lynda Robson 07 November 2008

A problem we don't seem to have here Marvin, but we need rain to survive, good write, Lynda xx 10

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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