Raining Hb Syllable Count 2-3-5-7-10 Poem by Heather Burns
Raining Hb Syllable Count 2-3-5-7-10
The rain
gently falls
sliding down her cheeks
drops to the ground in puddles
flooding all the highways along the way.
Another concise and powerful poem....without a lot of words, the message is understood. IMO, that is a successful poem.
The new experiment of 2-3-5-7-10 syllable count is excellent. I thought it was natural and did not note till you pointed it out to me. Keep going. I tried a new 2Q (two question) structure in some of my poems. Thank you.
Rains causing puddles also sliding down her cheeks.....So Beautiful write..Loved reading it....Beautiful write.
Rain causing puddles also drops down her cheeks. Or the other way. Nicely described in the poem. Thank you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 11:57:44 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Rain drops sliding own her cheeks Drop not in puddles But to made her blush As a token of dreams. Nice poem