washing their faces
clearing the cob
webs of life away
preparing them for
a better tomorrow
wrinkles of yesterday
begin to fade
with silken smiles of
Better tomorrow......10 I am sure Sun will secure Bright future For us to endure
Love the way you have described changing of mindset for better future. :)
Wonderful, amazing....true hope Glory to be Lord Love your art
thanks Stephen for selecting my poem I appreciate it. heather
With silken smiles of happiness we are swinging now because rain has washed faces. Smile is evergreen and very beautiful. This poem is very beautifully and excellently penned...10
Soothing words Heather, something to brighten ones day. Wrinkles or no wrinkles.
Full of hope and optimism. Well written my friend!
Sweet the natural process of age and healing well put.
Lovely way to say a better tomorrow with Gods's cleansing rain and your calming words...regards
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
I've made this poem one of my favourites. I love the way you describe raindrops washing cares away. It's brevity makes it all the more powerful. It's the kind of poem that can enter one's subconscious, you just need to imagine those raindrops. I will recommend reading this poem to any of my patients with lots of worries. I've just written a book on happiness, read thousands of poems in search of poems to help people, and found few as good as this. It's a shame my book has gone to print, I would have loved to include it (with your permission of course) .