Rainy Nights When The Highway Becomes A Looking Glass Poem by Sonny Rainshine

Rainy Nights When The Highway Becomes A Looking Glass



Mirror, mirror, on the pavement black
the night has doubled and reflects the track
of on-coming headlights piercing the dark,
a barrier of air, menacing and stark.

It’s disconcerting, seeing two of everything,
light refracted and frenetically dispersing.
A traffic light’s red blinking
gets me thinking

about danger, about the color red
and people I’ve never known, now dead,
who met their demise on a silvery street
betrayed by the man in the driver’s seat.

The rain is lulling on the windshield’s sprawl,
each dropp a mirrored ball.
Alone in my car, I feel conflicted,
both happy and sad, and contradicted.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Hansford 24 December 2008

The PH Dropp gremlin strikes again! (Thinks... if I spell DROP with 2 Ps - DROPP - will it come out as DROPPP?) But seriously though, this starts off quite interestingly, and even the short lines in verse 2 work in their own way. But by the time you reach the last verse you are trapped into rhyming for the sake of rhyme. Might it be better simply to droP (or even dropp) the last verse? (I had to use the capital there, because it doubled the P in lower case.)

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