Rainy Sky Poem by Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA

Rainy Sky

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Watch above the tree birds fly,
In happiness cries rainy sky.
Moving mind's thirst does die,
Drop of water drinks sand dry.

In mind father sweet does dwell,
Gathering emotion clouds tell.
Lightening in lap of sky does bell,
Sound of clouds words do spell.

Swelling with sea water you fill,
Flying clouds soon kiss the hill.
Amazing you soon give new thrill,
Watching you mind becomes still.

To supply water nature does care,
Fearing trees tremble blows air.
Beauty queen light sings a prayer,
Wisdom you teach sitting in chair.

We watch you do not know why
To tell secret who is here spy
Learning your art again we try,
Watch above the tree birds fly.

© Bhargabi Dei Mahakul,19 August 2015. All rights reserved.

Thursday, October 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,nature,rain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is written on 19 August 2015 and dedicated to the people of the world.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 08 June 2018

Rain! ! Gain, Again! With the romance of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Watch above the tree birds fly, In happiness cries rainy sky. A beautiful poem that brings forth the beauty of nature and the wisdom contained in understanding of spirituality in God's creation. Thank you for sharing such wonderful thoughts dear Madam.....10.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 06 October 2016

Gathering emotion clouds tell What an expression! 19 Aug 2015 by Rusty Coleman | Reply picture of T Owen Stark xyour attention to rhyme is wonderful...and loved the content of this poem...a joy to read 19 Aug 2015 by T Owen Stark | Reply picture of Ramin Ara xBeautifully penned, , , 19 Aug 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply picture of laura loveheart xA beautiful write, full of feeling, tfs, [3 19 Aug 2015 by laura loveheart | Reply picture of Angel mia LOVE xBeautifully landscaped I love the images u paint here tfs blessings dear xoxoxo xoxoxo xoxoxo 20 Aug 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply picture of Prashant Shaurya xOh the good old AAAA rhyming scheme. How beautiful it is to read this delightful piece. 21 Aug 2015 by Prashant Shaurya | Reply picture of Keith Labonte xWonderful imagery, superb poem, dear Bhargabi Dei. 21 Aug 2015 by Keith Labonte | Reply picture of Sylvia Frances Chan xSuch a divine poem, aptly worded, full of admiration for the One we worship our life long. You are a lovely poetess who creates ardent poetry rhymed classically, so beautiful. 22 Aug 2015 by Sylvia Frances Chan | Reply picture of Jane Taylor Hardy xExtraordinary! Beautifully composed. 27 Aug 2015 by Jane Taylor Hardy | Reply Note: These comments are received through poetfreak.

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Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA
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