Eye Dear Daddy Poem by Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA

Eye Dear Daddy

Rating: 5.0


Heaven ridge is calling crown
Calling crown, calling crown
Heaven ridge is calling crown
Eye Dear Daddy

Hold it up with mind and play
Mind and play, mind and play
Hold it up with mind and play
Eye dear daddy

Mind and play will last long,
Last long, last long,
Mind and play will last long,
Eye dear daddy

Make it up with move and porter
Move and porter, move and porter,
Make it up with move and porter
Eye dear daddy

Move and porter will not say
Will not say, will not say,
Move and porter will not say
Eye dear daddy

Make it up with glove and joy
Glove and joy, glove and joy,
Make it up with glove and joy
Eye dear daddy

Glove and joy will tear and throw,
Tear and throw, tear and throw,
Glove and joy will tear and throw,
Eye dear daddy

Make it up with sky and stars,
Sky and stars, sky and stars,
Make it up with sky and stars
Eye dear daddy

Sky and stars will fall down,
Fall down, fall down,
Sky and stars will fall down,
Eye dear daddy

Make it up with stones and matters
Stones and matters, stones and matters,
Make it up with stones and matters
Eye dear daddy

Stones and matters will blast and burn,
Blast and burn, blast and burn,
Stones and matters will blast and burn,
Eye dear daddy

Make it up with value and virtue,
Value and virtue, value and virtue,
Make it up with value and virtue
Eye dear daddy,

Value and virtue will shine ever
Shine ever, shine ever
Value and virtue will shine ever
Eye dear daddy

Copyright © Bhargabi Dei Mahakul,04, December 2017. All rights reserved.

Eye Dear Daddy
Monday, December 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: imagination,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muzahidul Reza 04 December 2017

Mind and play will last long, Last long, last long, Mind and play will last long, wonderfully lyrically rhythmic rhyme, a great poetic expression is pictured ih this poem, thanks for sharing the poem with us, ++++++++++++++++++++ 10

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Muzahidul Reza 04 December 2017

Value and virtue will shine ever Shine ever, shine ever Value and virtue will shine ever, rhythms resound extraordinarily, great done

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 December 2017

Mind and play! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Paul Brookes 04 December 2017

I like the rhythm of this piece it has the ring of London Bridge is falling down an old British nursery rhyme A great poem on living life well and with a good heart and virtuous spirit great piece 10 ++++

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Akhtar Jawad 04 December 2017

Such a sweet musical poem, and thoughtful as well. A great work, a nice poem, I loved the flow of lines.

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Khairul Ahsan 01 April 2020

A nice rhyming poem, 'Value and virtue will shine ever Shine ever, shine ever' - loved these lines!

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Akhtar Jawad 19 May 2018

I liked the title, I liked the thoughts and I liked the poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 December 2017

Part ONE This is amazingly set up, gorgeously created and so it sounds like a beautiful nursery rhyme or a musical poem, but it is NOT. It IZ what it IZ....a most ardent Devotional, it starts with a few words, but they grow in significance and finally this poems begs the reader to differ:

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 December 2017

Part TWO this is an exceptional poem about the Heavenly Father, our God the Almighty and that Value and virtue will shine ever, Eye dear daddy. Sheer poetry, created with great smartness of the mind.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 December 2017

Part THREE This poems shows deepest insight through simple looking words, and is greatest in its meaning, the imaginations are lyrical, spiritual (by the words Heaven ridge and Eye Dear Daddy) and philosophical. I have great respect for the choice of words, which lead the reader

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA
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