'Rajinigandha' - Haiku Poem by Seema Jayaraman

'Rajinigandha' - Haiku



'ra ji ni gan dha'
bouquet of ole memories
heart notes waft at dusk
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Copyright ©Seema Jayaraman, Mumbai 5Oct2015 All Rights Reserved

Monday, October 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: flowers
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Haiku on 'Rajinigandha' (Tuberose) flowers as a gift for my darling hubby on his b'day today. Remembering the huge bouquet of Rajinigandha (Tuberose (Polianthes tuberosa) flowers with which he had greeted me in a superfast train years ago.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 05 October 2015

Excellent. Nice presentation. Thanks for sharing.

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Seema Jayaraman 05 October 2015

Thank you Kumarmaniji, I invite you to read my haiku's on the sight of Sparrows I posted last night.

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M Asim Nehal 05 October 2015

Superb Haiku, And Happy Birthday to your beloved....

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Seema Jayaraman 05 October 2015

Thank you Asimji, I have found a very useful tool for checking the syllable correctness of Haiku, however the emotional depth and connect is left to human judgment. I invite you to read a few haiku's I posted last night on fast disappearing sparrows in city.

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