An Unknown Life Poem by Seema Jayaraman

An Unknown Life

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The warm friendly hand
embracing and encircling you
as the peaceful eternal sleep
come drifting on you

You enjoy the fine feeling
an angelic smile bedecks you
as your head slides besides
and calmness confronts you

Something so sublime, you never knew
These spectacular dazzling lights
greet you to eternal life
from millions of glowing stars

Taken on this grand tour
Where destiny merges with time
Millions of universes away
known only as dark death to mankind! !
©Seema Jayaraman (1986 or 87)

Wednesday, September 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: death
Again one of my old old hand written ones from school times, somewhere around 86 or 87, sorry its undated and I cant remember which grade I wrote this down. for preservation am uploading unedited on poem hunter site. thanks. seema
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 September 2015

this is stark rality blessedby an almighty nevrfeel sore but adore

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Seema Jayaraman 28 September 2015

Thank you

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Ketki Athavale 28 September 2015

Have never seen anything as beautiful written about a topic like death! My favourite lines: 'Taken on this grand tour. Where destiny merges with time.' Can't believe that you wrote this when you were in school!

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Bri Edwards 27 May 2017

i like it. AND it is short enough for me to use in my/our June 2017's showcase for PH poets on my PH site. let me know if you don't want it to be included, this coming month, with poems all by 'female' poets. favorite lines: Where destiny merges with time Millions of universes away known only as dark death to mankind! ! ......but, it seems it means more than dark death to you, and to millions........................................................................more who, unlike me, believe in 'life after death'. :) i would use comes: come drifting on you...............but i won't change it unless you tell/ask me to. i'll also use your Poet's Notes. Thanks, bri ;) to MyPoemList also.

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K. V. Venkataramana 17 October 2016

A mystical poem that I enjoyed reading. Best wishes from a fellow-poet extending a warm friendly hand!

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Dr Antony Theodore 03 January 2016

peaceful eternal sleep angelic smile calmness rom millions of glowing stars destiny merges with time Millions of universes away is it dark death at the end. i dont know or a heavenly joy in the world of light beyond all the millions of universes? ? thank you dear poetess. analysed ur poem and thought a lot about it. thankyou. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 November 2015

Embracing and encircling you with the muse of love. Nice work.

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Seema Jayaraman 03 November 2015

Thank you Edward.

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Shahin Latif 19 October 2015

Good ink. I love your poem. Thanks a lot dearest poet Be happy always.

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Seema Jayaraman 21 October 2015

Thank you Shahin.

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