An Unknown Life Poem by Seema Jayaraman

this is stark rality blessedby an almighty nevrfeel sore but adore

Have never seen anything as beautiful written about a topic like death! My favourite lines: 'Taken on this grand tour. Where destiny merges with time.' Can't believe that you wrote this when you were in school!

i like it. AND it is short enough for me to use in my/our June 2017's showcase for PH poets on my PH site. let me know if you don't want it to be included, this coming month, with poems all by 'female' poets. favorite lines: Where destiny merges with time Millions of universes away known only as dark death to mankind! ! ......but, it seems it means more than dark death to you, and to millions........................................................................more who, unlike me, believe in 'life after death'. :) i would use comes: come drifting on you...............but i won't change it unless you tell/ask me to. i'll also use your Poet's Notes. Thanks, bri ;) to MyPoemList also.

A mystical poem that I enjoyed reading. Best wishes from a fellow-poet extending a warm friendly hand!

peaceful eternal sleep angelic smile calmness rom millions of glowing stars destiny merges with time Millions of universes away is it dark death at the end. i dont know or a heavenly joy in the world of light beyond all the millions of universes? ? thank you dear poetess. analysed ur poem and thought a lot about it. thankyou. tony

Embracing and encircling you with the muse of love. Nice work.

Good ink. I love your poem. Thanks a lot dearest poet Be happy always.