Raking Feelings Poem by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Raking Feelings

Rating: 5.0


Stampeding through deserts of feelings,
trampling them all and leaving them to
dry out in the hot desert sun.
To be purified from all of existence and
later to be raked into piles and thrown
into poems.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny Rushton 22 April 2013

I like your poem. I tried to rate it (10) but couldn't, I don't know what I'm doing wrong, but it seems my vote isn't being counted.

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