...Random Musing-3 Poem by Sarvesh Kulkarni

...Random Musing-3

Rating: 5.0


In the destroyed essence of the flower petal,
takes birth Shiva.
and in the creative beauty of bud,
Brahma destroys himself.
in the momentary transitions of
the pulsations of being,
Vishnu unites both of them,
and spreads the fragments of his various existences,
in the truth called life.
In the numerous droplets of the ocean of life,
the sustainer recedes his being,
and bridges the waning moon at one side,
with the rising sun at the other.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Priyanka Bhowmick 24 June 2009

very wonderful composition.! ! i suggestion, it wud be better if u put Shiva and Brahma in Caps-lock.

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Catrina Heart 28 June 2009

Great stunning meaningful poem.............10/10

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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 27 June 2009

A poem written with extra ordinary prowess. Sure, one day you will be a noted poet. Kudos.

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Maitreyee Joshi 26 June 2009

sarvesh, ur poem after reading again gives an evolved meaning.it is so beautiful! great mind at work.keep it up.10+++

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Maitreyee Joshi 25 June 2009

good one, this poetic creation of the universe, put in ur random musing so exquisite way. thanks

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Indira Babbellapati 24 June 2009

i salute your wonderful juxtaposition of images!

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