Gurleen kaur Narang

Bronze Star - 2,299 Points (6April,1999 / Punjab, India)

Random Thoughts - Poem by Gurleen kaur Narang

The world is beautiful,
But my vision isn't.
The weather is good,
But my mood isn't.

Totally helpless,
I cry, I cry, I cry..........
If happiness were sold in a shop,
I would buy!

In this hustle & bustle,
Silently, I weep;
In my little world,
Happiness seldom creeps.

All I want is
Talk to someone who understands me,
My doubts & queries
Are as deep as sea.

All I urge is,
Travel To A place unknown,
Where mind is free
& thoughts all vibrant are born!

When despair looms into my view,
And dearest dreams seem blighted,
I write a poem,
My spirit once again is ignited!

Topic(s) of this poem: anxiety, dreams, happiness, loneliness, thoughts, vision

Form: Prose Poem

Comments about Random Thoughts by Gurleen kaur Narang

  • (7/18/2017 3:35:00 PM)

    well penned! keep writing (Report)Reply

    Gurleen Kaur Narang(7/19/2017 12:31:00 PM)

    Thank you for the appreciation and I will definitely keep on writing!

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  • (7/18/2017 3:06:00 PM)

    That's a beautiful poem. It let me know you are going through all that young people go through and I'm so glad
    you think the world is a beautiful place, let's keep it beautiful by our kindness to each other......

    Gurleen Kaur Narang(7/19/2017 12:34:00 PM)

    Yeah, the world is surely beautiful but our prospective and conditions sometimes blur our vision.Thanks for your valuable observation on my poem.Your comment will be treasured.

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  • Jazib Kamalvi (7/10/2017 2:35:00 AM)

    Nice poetic thoughts. Thanks (Report)Reply

    Gurleen Kaur Narang(7/12/2017 11:09:00 AM)

    I am glad you loved poem! thanks for the appreciation!

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  • (7/9/2017 11:08:00 PM)

    This is a great poem. Writing is good for the spirit. (Report)Reply

    Gurleen Kaur Narang(7/12/2017 11:16:00 AM)

    Yeah, writing refreshes our mind and rejuvenates our soul.thanks for the appreciation.I am glad you loved my poem.

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (7/9/2017 1:59:00 PM)

    My dear Gurleen, you have painted this poem in a deepest ideology. World is beautiful but our vision isn't. Different persons have different views as per their dreams, as per their situations or as per their mental outlook. However truthfulness and nonviolence bring peace and free mind and free mind brings happiness and prace. It can't be bought in the market as you have depicted gorgeously to be quoted... If happiness were sold in a shop,
    I would buy! Thanks for best presentation...10

    Gurleen Kaur Narang(7/12/2017 11:23:00 AM)

    It really gave an immense satisfaction to know that you loved my poem! When the reader understands exactly what the poet wants to convey, the poet is on the top of the world.thanks for your feedback sir!

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 9, 2017

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