Theodora (Theo) Onken

Gold Star - 25,323 Points (Washington State)

Rapture? - Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

...A float in Holy Waters of The Jordon...
Or cleansed, by the zephyrs of new Spring-
...My spirit blends, as the Angels ascend...
While goodness and mercy, are on the wing!

Filled to full with the deepest blue-
The velvet sky denies the cloud-
...But welcomes in and through-
The melodies, of sweet song birds-aloud!

...Singing their Psalms of early morn...
Praising our butter-yellow Sun-
...Breathing mystical magic all over our Earth...
Almost, as if, a New Heaven has begun!

...A Heaven, perhaps on Earth?
Divine and promised to us someday-
...'Tis this the scene, for things to come? ...
When The Rapture, has made its way?

...When all things old and still sin-filled...
Die off, and disappear in a glow?
...And a New Heaven 'tis born to this Earth?
While together, The Saved and God grow?

Comments about Rapture? by Theodora (Theo) Onken

  • (9/23/2007 1:32:00 AM)

    Ah, Marci, You Are Still In Love...Lol!
    It Shows...can you feel it in the wind, and every where you go? Cause if its all around you, than lets those feeling show! Can you feel it in your fingers, and feel it in your toes, so if you really love him, then let your feelings show!
    Best wishes, and thanks for reading,
    Theo xxxoo; 0)

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  • (9/22/2007 12:15:00 PM)

    Beautiful, sweet heaven and heart are at this moment indeed in rapture, the the remembrance of two pairs of big 'blue' eyes and all the love within two young precious souls, gifts from God and the angels above. love, marci.xox (Report)Reply

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  • (9/22/2007 5:13:00 AM)

    Beautiful up lifting poem to start the day, Theo beautiful write again...10 (Report)Reply

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  • (9/22/2007 4:20:00 AM)

    don't we all look forward to what's expressed in the last four lines? hope the day isn't far off... (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 22, 2007

Poem Edited: Monday, April 11, 2011

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