Rationalising The World Through Words Poem by Not Long Left

Rationalising The World Through Words

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Rationalising the world,
through words,
hiding emotions,
in metaphors and ryhme,
as a poet this is my crime.
living in a world of words,
surfing on the waves of inspiration,
feeling at times like a clogged up atery,
with thoughts and feelings and dreams,
caughts in long winding streams of poetic purpose.
seeing life through a bottle,
a utopic lonely life,
like that of a salt tasting fisherman,
waiting in knowing assureness,
that the right catch will take the bait.
like a child that turns to comics,
to make sense of the world,
i pick up a pen,
and with strokes and swirls,
decorate the lonely page.
with a poem

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Slimboydim . 04 January 2006

Vincent, i enjoy reading your poetry. At this point though, i have to tell you that i do not have any technical skills in the composition of poetry. Nor the vocabulary to give your poem the full critical appraisal some of the poetry forum snobs crave. All i really want to say is that i enjoyed this, so easy to read it flows beautifully. I thought it was a great poem. Thank you for sharing, sorry i couldnt be more critical! Kindest Regards Slim. x.

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Moya Levy 04 January 2006

Lovely poem Vincent, Moyax

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