Ray Of Hope Poem by Sarin Gomes

Ray Of Hope

Rating: 4.3


Traces of hope underlying words spoken;
In the darkness that unfolds broken-
Is like the sun that lights the night sky
Rekindling it with colours that pry
Hoping it would never die.

Shadows of unhappiness that follow;
Leave a feeling so hollow
Choke the light of ray-
That promises to brighten your day,
Putting an end to your pray.

Tuesday, October 31, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: hopelessness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abhimanyu Kumar.s 20 November 2017

Amazing write. There is always a need of your title strength. Very good

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 October 2017

An amazing poem is shared..10

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Sarin Gomes 01 November 2017

Thank you!

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Brianna Griffin 31 October 2017

Hi Sarin, I just wanted to say I've enjoyed the poems you've shared so far. They are so well written! ! I hope to hear more from you soon.

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Sarin Gomes 01 November 2017

Hi Brianna, I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem. Will definitely invite you to read my next poem.

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