Where are you?
I can't feel you.
I can't hear you.
I can't see you.
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A heartfelt poem yearning for the presence of a loved one. An honest and direct expressions of longings so touchingly presented.
A great poem, although full of a sense of desperation. It conveys its message strikingly!
I concur with the wonderful comments of Poet Timber. You convey your message strikingly. A magnificent poem.