Ready For You

Rating: 4.5

On stage!
Like an ocean voyage;
With my age,
One step forward! !
With the prelude of my life.

Love,
With the sound of a rustling in the trees;
Scarping tones,
Magic! !
With a sparkling melody.

Here and there,
Somewhere in the bush,
Ready for you,
Anywhere with my sweet love.

Wednesday, December 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: sound
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 10 December 2015

Like an ocean voyage; With my age, I am ready for you to express sweet love. Very fantastic sharing definitely. Wise poem shared.10

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Brian Mayo 09 December 2015

I question the use of prelude. Are you young or old? I love the poem. It packs bunches of life and longing into a few short stanzas. So in love that even old familiar sounds seem different and new. Well done.

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