Edward Kofi Louis

Gold Star - 315,509 Points (13th October 1961 / Accra, GHANA)

Ready For You - Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

On stage!
Like an ocean voyage;
With my age,
One step forward! !
With the prelude of my life.

Love,
With the sound of a rustling in the trees;
Scarping tones,
Magic! !
With a sparkling melody.

Here and there,
Somewhere in the bush,
Ready for you,
Anywhere with my sweet love.

Topic(s) of this poem: sound


Comments about Ready For You by Edward Kofi Louis

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (12/10/2015 4:19:00 AM)


    Like an ocean voyage;
    With my age, I am ready for you to express sweet love. Very fantastic sharing definitely. Wise poem shared.10
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  • Brian Mayo (12/9/2015 12:13:00 PM)


    I question the use of prelude. Are you young or old?
    I love the poem. It packs bunches of life and longing into a few short stanzas.
    So in love that even old familiar sounds seem different and new.
    Well done.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 9, 2015



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