Wednesday, December 9, 2015

Ready For You Comments

Rating: 4.5

On stage!
Like an ocean voyage;
With my age,
One step forward! !
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Edward Kofi Louis
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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 December 2015

Like an ocean voyage; With my age, I am ready for you to express sweet love. Very fantastic sharing definitely. Wise poem shared.10

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Brian Mayo 09 December 2015

I question the use of prelude. Are you young or old? I love the poem. It packs bunches of life and longing into a few short stanzas. So in love that even old familiar sounds seem different and new. Well done.

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Edward Kofi Louis

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