On stage!
Like an ocean voyage;
With my age,
One step forward! !
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I question the use of prelude. Are you young or old? I love the poem. It packs bunches of life and longing into a few short stanzas. So in love that even old familiar sounds seem different and new. Well done.
Like an ocean voyage; With my age, I am ready for you to express sweet love. Very fantastic sharing definitely. Wise poem shared.10