Real Cheers Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Real Cheers

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I ventured to find out happiness
I found no reason to convince
What does it mean to offer?
Many friends replied and differed

I had my own perception
To think in relevant terms and relation
It occurred to me many times
I wanted to write down sometimes

It must satisfy inner core
So the desires can be thought over
If they are unreasonable and beyond limit
You should not even welcome or greet

It may give rise to frustration
It will compete for unhealthy relation
It may force you to go for any available means
Here it generates inferiority and really seen

The self contentment should be first priority
That helps to build real personality]
It not only gives birth to happiness
But brings about some changes on the face

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 April 2014

Good Sarah Jade10 minutes ago Your poem has a lot of feeling, I love it.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 April 2014

Full of wisdom Faheem Jawaid8 minutes ago The last line is very meaningful - the end result. Great read Hasmukh. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 April 2014

Lawng Victoria Spark10 minutes ago Too long, sorry.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 April 2014

I like it Stephanie Celusta9 minutes ago I like this poem. I get the meaning of it and it really hits home. I think it would have been written a little better but overall it was great. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 April 2014

I ventured to find out happiness I found no reason to convince

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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