Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 518,487 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Real Value - Poem by Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Who has made me sleepless?
Who has taken away all my happiness?
Why have I changed a lot?
What in turn have I got?

Lies, deception all were for me
It has made me prisoner and not free
I wanted to fly in fresh air
Does it look to you as very fair?

I am bodily broken
Confidence has shattered and mentally shaken
I have not enough courage to stand?
Are we still very much close and friend?

I want to make it as reality?
Love can be made and look super quality
There is fair chance of being loved
Put in confidence and show that you have believed

There won't be any use
If I shun the eyes and refuse
To accept her real message
That can remain with me till last age

I did underestimate the real value
I failed to grasp and need to view
Why did I look at and care for outer show?
Why did I hurry so much and not allow her to grow?

Love can't be one sided
It can't be one side decided
Fair chance is to be afforded to seek her opinion
Before she is entering holy alliance for becoming companion

Love hinges on delicate thread
In hunger it is chosen as bread
Gives sweetness as you chew more
So praise her and always adore

You may suffer more as consequence
If missed it inadvertently in life at once
It may not knock often even if desired
Memory may invade at later stage even when you are retired


Comments about Real Value by Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (8/14/2012 3:29:00 AM)


    ''Love can't be one sided
    It can't be one side decided''
    - really wonderful
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/13/2012 9:29:00 PM)


    Tere Lara Wow really something my sweet friend thank you very much for delighting us with your writings like SASKIA says Shakerpeare from India! (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/13/2012 9:28:00 PM)


    sky high good one, make me think of my real value to someone i love.. (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/13/2012 9:28:00 PM)


    Re: Real value (Score: 1) Monday, August 13,2012 (08: 29: 28) U tAkE My BrE.. great..poem real to me (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/13/2012 9:28:00 PM)


    pallavi sharma unfortunately men goes for outer look only! ! ! ! they never look inside, , , , , , , Reply to This | Parent | Delete (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (8/13/2012 6:20:00 AM)


    Your poem always has a value as it tells many idea and good stuffs from you to us, that one i consider as a real value...even you just learn the real value but the value of your lesson is a big real value as you share it now! _Unwritten SOul (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/13/2012 3:16:00 AM)


    Who has made me sleepless?
    Who has taken away all my happiness?
    Why have I changed a lot?
    What in turn have I got?
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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 13, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, August 13, 2012


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