Realm Of Reality Poem by Aqeb Benazir Ibn Minar
Realm Of Reality
Introduction: Life is a mystery with many ups and downs throughout the journey. The journey filled with thoughts of tranquility and turmoil. But the perfect sensation is the time when you get to feel closer to your Almighty, the one who understands you the best, your closest friend, your hope and light, your solution to every problem, The mystery you came to life to solve and to believe in. Even in the happiest and the saddest moments, He is always there when you need Him.
Right now I am, thinking what to write
Holding my pen, it's almost midnight,
I'm truly out of words, to express my whole life,
It's so absurd, cut all pain through a knife
And I wish I could feel, Your presence in my soul
I know that You know, what I am going through
And I'm not sure I believe, unless I really feel
But I know when You're not there, so I pray to feel You near
Now I can see, what this life is about
Now I do know, I'm too lost without,
Diamond in the rough, that's what I was
But now I'm reborn by the shower of Your bliss
I'd die to satisfy, I'd do everything I can,
No matter how tough, after all I'm a man
I won't fall apart, You're always in my heart
I'd swim oceans and more, only to be Your friend
This undying grace of Your creation,
Time and space, more than perfection
You've opened my eyes and showed me the truth
You've blessed peace to my soul; I know what's my role
I see two key coins, one black and one white
And all I have to join, the one with Your light
Life is as it is, we make it our own
Hard or easy, full or alone
Everything grows, as they all involve
With the rose you put down, to show us what's love
I wake up early, to see Your beauty,
Throughout the morning sun, I feel complete and done,
I drive all the way and see my problems solved,
By Your love from above, I stand still so firm
Everything I do, everywhere I go,
Every moment I breathe, I remind myself of You...My Almighty.
Your talent has me at an awe, if only I could write the way you do. I'm not jealous but definitely envious of such a skill. If your age rings true. then you are truly blessed so never stop writing. I work at it everyday, if only to better myself in someway. And still you make me look like a little boy still trying grasp the world. No 11 on here so I hope you can settle for a 10.
Hi Aqeb, read all 4 of your poems, especially I enjoyed this one. You can sense your spirituality through your words. The first lines are very light also have a very deep meaning and i'm amazed to see how you put this 'lightness' and then at the same time this 'deepness' style of poetic writing into one poems. So well done. it has a very sensational feeling to it. Your only a young person but write as someone much experienced, So you will obviously progress into a fine poet if you keep it up! ! I can connect so much with your poems, thank you alot for sharing.
'And I wish I could feel, Your presence in my soul' This line is sublime. I think this is what real prayer is all about. If we truly want to feel God's presence in our soul, our prayers become meaningful. It requires concentration, thinking alertness, feeling and intuition all at the same time, but praying with the true aim to be close to God, is so rewarding. If people pray because they fear our Creator, they are on the wrong foot. Our Creator deserves the best of our love. I think you were touching me very much with this poem. Really good. In a similar context I wrote: 'sacrifice for the ego, privilege for the soul'.
my friend i love your work, well done/10 excellent written with heart gordon
Dude....THIS-IS-POETRYYYYYYYYY! I love this poem. This is one of my favorites. BOOKMARK BUTTON ACTIVATE!
The introductory plot is brilliant.A well appreciated work and splendid write.
The last 3 lines have a real falling intonation, well planned lines bro
Wow! Am tongue-tied i would comment bt no words to much ya' benazir, excellent
am really out of words cuz this is just awesome! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! you're really talented and i adore you.keep it up
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 12:28:00 PM # 1.0.0
This thing is nothing more than an amateurish sermon, so far as I can tell. There is a glimpse perhaps of something poetical now and again, but the total sum equates to no more than a prayer with a quirky and (won't name it) agenda. You can't fool me with dictates developed for a desert people a 1000 years ago. Forget about it: I'm an atheist already. I believe that science holds all the keys to the questions of existence. Period.