Rebellious Sentiments Poem by Aria Siren

Rebellious Sentiments

Rating: 4.5


dont reason me out of my feelings
what I feel for you
is past sense
is past logic
has gone from the lament of the innocents
to the catacomb cry of something tragic
it has chained me under the tide
it has left me without heart to decide
it has broken through the bars of sanity
it has evolved into something greater than humanity

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alla Simone 30 September 2012

Your voice and ideas escalate magnificently in this piece. A crescendo of feelings so easy to relate to. I like the feverish energy that is conveyed- gives the idea of a mad scientist, or one crazed with affection, lol. Thanks for sharing.

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Alexis ... 06 September 2012

Wow very good! It started off powerfully and ended even more so with the last line. Very good!

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