Red Apples And Scarlet Blouses Poem by Ballerina With Fins

Red Apples And Scarlet Blouses

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Under the apple tree
in fall, eating
rubies the size of her palm.
Leaves falling on to her
lap, autumn rain falling on to
her hair, sweeping her face gently.
The intricacy of her blouse
is breathtaking; the day is
stunned by the simplicity of red silk.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sonny Rainshine 06 July 2006

I think this is among your best (of those of yours I've read anyway) . It presents a very vivid (and very red) image that lingers. Good job.

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Aashish Ameya 06 July 2006

good poem dear.....keep writing

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