Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 688,256 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Remain Touchy - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

What must be said about poet?
When he is at work and very alert
Keeps moving with revolutionary thoughts
And takes full precaution not to be caught

Still it leaves with lots of ground
Some of the thoughts are not found
They are missing originality
Readers pick it up as bad quality

It is often pointed out bluntly
So the poet becomes aware and rectifies suitably
It has no tone of insult
But readers and poet’s relation remain well built

You may have different view points on poverty
You may express it as fallen grace of almighty
The poet may paint it as grace of almighty
A phase not to remain permanent but temporary

Same way beautiful ready may be compared
He has the imagination and openly dared
Many may praise out right and others may condemn
But after all he is the poet and has thought power to turn

Well, that shall always remain
So long humanity suffers with pain
Feels agony and goes out with sympathy
Each individual feels about it and remains touchy

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/21/2014 2:54:00 AM)

    Rohani Daud likes this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/20/2014 6:14:00 PM)

    What a poem


    Levi Domingos18 minutes ago
    Powerful and amazing piece of art well done indeed
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/20/2014 6:14:00 PM)

    awww

    Sarah Busch25 minutes ago
    awww i love it i know how that feels
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/20/2014 6:13:00 PM)

    the poet


    Bridget Dunst22 minutes ago
    Makes you feel like poets are the underdog in the world of writing, and that they have to prove their worth.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/20/2014 6:12:00 PM)

    Good


    Ayrton Pinto20 minutes ago
    I liked the imagery in the poem. However it felt like the rhythm and rhyme were to forced making it lose some of its edge. i wish you luck with further writings.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/20/2014 6:12:00 PM)

    ok

    Dan down23 minutes ago
    need to work on the rythmn and flow
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/20/2014 5:39:00 PM)

    What must be said about poet?
    When he is at work and very alert
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 20, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, March 21, 2014


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