Response Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Response

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Tuesday, June 2018

Response or no response
one shouldn't feel tense
one should agree on this point
His or her poems should be painted with poetry colors

One doesn't write to please someone
but to strengthen
the close bonds with the readers
and if possible render some service as the writer

as we go in for supporting newcomers
there remains no consideration for the writer
he does it with one aim of giving an encouragement
so some attention or no attention makes no adverse moment

if "post one and comment two" is implemented
I think, some kind of bond towards writing, might be developed
it is not the question of who comments on what
the reader develops the skill and brilliantly not caught

I invite long discussion
but there remains no confusion
it is bond or relation
that puts new and new additions

Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta

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welcome Ranjan Yadav 1 mutual friend Friend Friends

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welcome Сиддхарт Путин 5 mutual friends 1 Manage Like · Reply · 1m

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Dear Hasmukh – You have made several meaningful observations through your ever-beautiful poetic lines. You have been a very loyal & prolific member of YS with spontaneity on any topic. Thank you. AtreyaSarma U, Bengaluru, Jun 19,2018

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if post one and comment two is implemented I think, some kind of bond towards writing, might be developed it is not the question of who comments on what the reader develops the skill and brilliantly not caught

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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