Linda Hepner

Veteran Poet - 1,166 Points (London)

Restaurant Scene - Poem by Linda Hepner

The candle flickers on the restaurant table,
Shadows lie across the menu listing
Spicy rice and chutneys we are able
To taste in silence, both our eyes resisting
Intimacy we’ve bitten in our lips;
A lifetime’s truths and treason we must hide
As even candlelight can not eclipse
The light that conversation would provide.

Another couple nearby shamelessly
Gaze at eachother: he loquatious, talks
To hide his lustful motives; blamelessly
She listens, smiles as if agreeing, stalks
With creeping hand his careless fingers, seeming
As if she wasn’t waiting for his hot advance…
He strokes her patient palm and says that dreaming
Had not prepared him for this true romance.

We eavesdrop, voyeurs, as they unaware
Lighten our burdened hearts; released we smile
One to the other, as two colleagues share
A secret, and superior awhile
To all the world, we let ourselves direct
Our eyes to one another, surface glance
That we will feast on, greedily connect
A moment, then return to routine trance.

12.20.05


Comments about Restaurant Scene by Linda Hepner

  • (2/21/2006 11:05:00 AM)


    A true people watcher is a rare thing, two together are an unstoppable force. I enjoyed reading this very much. Well thought out with clever rhymes and a lovely subject. Thanks for letting us in on the secret!
    Hugs
    Anna xxx
    (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (12/21/2005 10:44:00 PM)


    Shalom,

    This is very well delineated. A tale well-told, the older, more experienced couple and the younger couple who remind them of the erotic dinner dance. Good poem. The descriptions are vivid and we who have some years under our belts can certainly identify with the point of view.

    All the best with Peace.

    Hugh
    (Report) Reply

  • (12/21/2005 5:58:00 PM)


    the manifestation of need
    that yearning
    sweeping away
    distance
    because it's so hard to bear
    yet how this is done
    the great mystery
    of human connection
    to really know the other
    and the other really knowing you
    without masks
    naked
    in a world filled with high fashion
    a wonderful poem
    (Report) Reply

  • (12/21/2005 11:08:00 AM)


    unlike the majority of the attempted poems posted by novice poets on this site, this one actually works, which proved a pleasant surprise. i would say this is a nice lyric poem, which captures well the atmosphere and absurdity of the dating game. (Report) Reply

Read all 4 comments »



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?



Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 21, 2005



Famous Poems

  1. Still I Rise
    Maya Angelou
  2. The Road Not Taken
    Robert Frost
  3. If You Forget Me
    Pablo Neruda
  4. Dreams
    Langston Hughes
  5. Annabel Lee
    Edgar Allan Poe
  6. Stopping By Woods On A Snowy Evening
    Robert Frost
  7. If
    Rudyard Kipling
  8. Do Not Stand At My Grave And Weep
    Mary Elizabeth Frye
  9. I Do Not Love You Except Because I Love You
    Pablo Neruda
  10. Television
    Roald Dahl
[Report Error]