Revelation Poem by Ananda Alves

Revelation

Rating: 5.0


You can brake
Breath relieved
Look around, see perfection
Observe nifty scenes in motion
Or balk for a second
Hold a bit, fearless
Believe in anything
That's stupidity
Run, eyes shut
Maybe it can be good

Someone may stare at you
Luckly, a good listener
But I'm selfish
Do you want me?
Well, I don't.

And when you turn around,
The best you've ever done
In fact
Was done by someone else.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tarapada Mohapatra 04 November 2007

It exudes your unfathomable potential to creat magic with words Please read my poems and advise

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David Harris 10 May 2007

Ananda, this sounds as if your a bit upset with yourself. I don't know why when you write such lovely verse like this. Lovely flow that just kept me reading until the end. Big 10 from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Ananda Alves

Ananda Alves

Rio de Janeiro, Brazil
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