Screaming Silence Poem by Ananda Alves

Screaming Silence

Rating: 5.0


Just a few doubts to make one sure.
Just a few mistakes to make one regret.
Just a few memories to make one forget.

So many issues to block one's acts.
So many scars to mark one's soul.
So many lies to remind one's past.

A hundred thoughts but just one head.
A thousand pictures to a single mind.
A million feelings in just one heart.

Uncountable emotions like sadness and violence.
Unconscious postures of self indulgence.
Unbearable screams culminating in silence.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajaram Ramachandran 06 May 2007

So many ideas in one single poem-really excellent.

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Dee Daffodil 07 May 2007

I love the third stanza the best! I think that gives the ssence of the poem! Hugs, Dee

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Kristoffer Pedersen 07 May 2007

A very great poem. Especially A million feelings in just one heart. Very nice

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Sallie Howson 08 May 2007

and i love the last line..if these are your first fruits i'm really looking forward to more

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Mary Das 08 May 2007

Awesome! You should write more. A good piece. Wish you all the best.Take care.

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Mona Martinez 18 March 2009

cool. i never seen a poem written so good by kind of repeating itself. good job.

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Michael Saurer 17 May 2007

Nothing to say but: WOW

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Hiraa Kazmi 11 May 2007

beautiful. a good effort to capture the echoe and sounds of silence. keep writing.

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Miss Cruz 11 May 2007

yeah i mean that was a pretty good poem I really liked it Miss Cruz

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awsome..yeah u should keep writing

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Ananda Alves

Ananda Alves

Rio de Janeiro, Brazil
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