Ananda Alves

Rookie (November 8th.1983 / Rio de Janeiro, Brazil)

Cliché Love - Poem by Ananda Alves

Your absence consumes me so hard
Just hard as your unbearable presence

Your eyes give me confort when they follow me
But they follow me so constantly your stares look haunted

Your hands provide me great pleasure
Yet it's so deep that makes me want to crush you

Your body is my safest place to hide
However it hides me so much I can easily get lost

Your love drives me crazy
So crazy it makes me hate you

You know me so well that you own me
But here's my payback: I know you in the same way
And guess what? It makes us even
(even more in love)

Comments about Cliché Love by Ananda Alves

  • (3/26/2009 6:34:00 PM)

    Another very nicely written piece which I enjoyed reading. I'm sure I shall return to read it again. Thank you Annie. (Report) Reply

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  • (3/19/2009 2:21:00 PM)

    greeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeat....well done :) (Report) Reply

  • (6/3/2007 12:32:00 AM)

    I admit it. You make me jealous; -)
    great write. DK
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  • (5/10/2007 4:56:00 PM)

    'Your absence consumes me so hard
    Just hard as your unbearable presence'

    beautifully IS like that...
    cheers! !
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  • (5/8/2007 8:02:00 PM)

    Just read this poem...BEAUTIFUL! You have a real talent. I gave you a 10.
    Your friend, Cecelia
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  • (5/7/2007 8:25:00 PM)

    I like this. Contradictory, just like love/lust always is. You write with honesty. (Report) Reply

  • (5/7/2007 2:45:00 PM)

    Put together VERY well, and beautifully said. You have some killer lines here. S x (Report) Reply

  • (5/7/2007 11:10:00 AM)

    Ananda, it is very deep and powerful, surprising and insightful too. A special poem.. reflecting special feelings! Frank (Report) Reply

  • (5/7/2007 9:02:00 AM)

    Conflicting emotions here Ananda... Love to hate and back to love again, yes some relationships are like that..well written poem...10 (Report) Reply

  • (5/7/2007 5:01:00 AM)

    This is a wonderful poem Ananda. Certainly a pleasure to read it. I love how you present the conflict of love and hate... How one thing can be good and at the same time... consuming or over whelming. Keep up the good work. This poem is terrific.
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  • (5/6/2007 4:16:00 PM)

    Ananda, this is a lovely love poem. It is filled with sweet enchanting words. A worthy 10 in my mind. Thanks for sharing it my friend.
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 6, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 22, 2011

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