Revelation Poem by Marieta Maglas

In ascesis. I keep the selected feelings For the perpetuation of love moments, And I feel the light, That absorbs the darkness.... just boooooooooooooooootiful

excellent poem nice use of words i like this

Hauntingly beautiful. Vivid imagery presents a glowing scenerio - one of inner contemplation and understanding. A deeply introspective write - brilliant! Linda :)

excellent....you have an uncanny knack of relating imagery to the depths of emotions. thank you very much.

keep the selected feelings For the perpetuation of love moments, And I feel the light, That absorbs the darkness.... divine feeling at the particular moments with removal of darkness fromthe life..lovely poem and i appreciate it....10 read mine what happens if..... what do i seek

I can see the light of a burning candle, I can see the drops of its wax and light, Near that incurable sadness, Generated by the death of loved. a great piece from a rich poem of perfect poet marieta..who knows how to make good poems...this poem is also one of her best work.. explanatory style of writing but with a deep thoughtful idea.. really a good and heart ouching job.. well done friend marieta...10/10

A touchingly passionate poem. Its obvious your words are deeply felt and the imagery is beautiful as i saw the scene as you portrayed it. Very well done and thank you for sharing :)

From : Deborah Cromer (United States ;) To : Marieta Maglas Date Time : 6/6/2009 3: 12: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Revelation Your last line' And I feel the light, That absorbs the darkness, is awesome. Intense, and highly done. It made me think. I went there, to find the feeling. What I felt like, feeling the light, absorbing darkness. Good work. You have powerful words too. Deborah Cromer

I see the light that abosrbs the dark. what an imagination from poet.Yes masterly stroke and mesasge to tohe mankind....10