I saw an angel with a wounded wing
And two drops of blood
As a fractured image.
I felt the pain of that angel
Inside of me.
It was a touch.
I saw the light of a burning candle
And its drops of wax
As a fractured love
I felt the sadness of that love
Inside of me.
It was a touch.
I heard the Words of God
Between drops of silence
And fractured sounds.
I felt the happiness
Inside of me.
It was a touch.
In this light,
The angel
Was talking to me.
I am awakened.
Poem by Marieta Maglas
Hauntingly beautiful. Vivid imagery presents a glowing scenerio - one of inner contemplation and understanding. A deeply introspective write - brilliant! Linda :)
excellent....you have an uncanny knack of relating imagery to the depths of emotions. thank you very much.
keep the selected feelings For the perpetuation of love moments, And I feel the light, That absorbs the darkness.... divine feeling at the particular moments with removal of darkness fromthe life..lovely poem and i appreciate it....10 read mine what happens if..... what do i seek
I can see the light of a burning candle, I can see the drops of its wax and light, Near that incurable sadness, Generated by the death of loved. a great piece from a rich poem of perfect poet marieta..who knows how to make good poems...this poem is also one of her best work.. explanatory style of writing but with a deep thoughtful idea.. really a good and heart ouching job.. well done friend marieta...10/10
A touchingly passionate poem. Its obvious your words are deeply felt and the imagery is beautiful as i saw the scene as you portrayed it. Very well done and thank you for sharing :)
From : Deborah Cromer (United States ;) To : Marieta Maglas Date Time : 6/6/2009 3: 12: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Revelation Your last line' And I feel the light, That absorbs the darkness, is awesome. Intense, and highly done. It made me think. I went there, to find the feeling. What I felt like, feeling the light, absorbing darkness. Good work. You have powerful words too. Deborah Cromer
I see the light that abosrbs the dark. what an imagination from poet.Yes masterly stroke and mesasge to tohe mankind....10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
In ascesis. I keep the selected feelings For the perpetuation of love moments, And I feel the light, That absorbs the darkness.... just boooooooooooooooootiful